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I like it -- it makes sense to me -- though there are some things I would like to point out:

- The 4th line actually has 倩 instead of 請 in the original scans (倩誰記去作奇傳). As for the 枘 in the Korean version, I must confess that I can‘t make sense of that character in there at all...

- 偈 (to my knowledge) is a special type of poem: it refers to a specific kind of Buddhist verse (or gāthā; it's written in 4 lines like the 絕句, but can be any number of characters each -- it doesn't have to be either seven or five -- i.e. it can be 3x4, 4x4, 5x4, 6x4 or 7x4 etc.)

https://dict.revised.moe.edu.tw/dictView.jsp?ID=5457#col4 (see last entry)

- My knowledge of Japanese isn't (even nearly a 10000th) good enough to judge the translations, however, although the second (AI?) translation seems more compact and perhaps somewhat more poem-like, I have doubts about 空しく in the second line. The rather negative meaning here (that seems to be something like 空虛地、白費丶in vain etc.) doesn‘t seem to be in line with the way Buddhism usually uses the character 空 -- at least as far as I know.

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